Wednesday, March 22, 2017

Test Revision WS Key

A I. 
1. She likes eating junk/ fast/ fried/ sugary food and drinking soft drinks.
2. It was because she felt sick.
3. She should lose weight by doing some sports. 
4. She will play table tennis twice a week.
5. She will have low-fat yoghurt or green salads as snacks.
6. Students’ answers.

AII.
This is an (1) _________interview___ from a (2) ____children’s magazine_____. 
Helen Lau interviewed Eric Yip, the (3) ___most popular____ singer in Hong Kong. 
Eric said he likes (4) ______eating_______ a lot, but he (5) ________doesn’t/ does not___ eat meat. 
He also likes watching TV, like those (6) _______cookery____ programmes and documentaries. 
He also watches (7) _______sports programmes__. 
When he (8) ___watches____ his favourite football team play in (9) _____matches_________, he can’t leave the TV! 
But he thinks that (10) ___spending___ too much time on TV is not a good idea.
B.
5th November 2016
          I (1) ______had___ (have) a bad day! 
At lunchtime, no one (2) ____sat____ (sit) with me. 
One girl (3) _____said__ (say), ‘You’re stinky! You smell terrible!’
 I (4) ____felt_____ (feel) very bad. 
I (5) _____told____(tell) my sister Carol about this. 
She (6) __has_____ (have) many friends. She can help me.

After talking to Carol, I (7) ___promised______ (promise) her that starting from tomorrow
 I (8) _____will brush___ (brush) my teeth every morning and every night. 
Besides on Mondays and Thursdays, I (9) ___________will wash_____ (wash) my hair on Tuesdays and Saturdays too.
 I (10) ____will change__ (change) my socks every day.
 I (11) will not be/ won’t be (not, be) stinky anymore.
 I (12) ________will help_ (help) my classmates more. I will make more friends!

C.
1. I think she is the more easy-going person.      
1.        most            
2. Judy is patient. She talks a lot!
2.    talkative          
3. “What is your mum like?” “She likes cooking.”
3.        does            
4. Turn right and go straight head.
4.       ahead            
5. We will take lot of lovely photos with Grandma.
5.        lots             
6. I hope your exam go well yesterday.
6.        went            
7. The Simpson family will go shopping last Friday. 
7.        went            
8. Once upon a time, there is a princess called Snow White.
8.        was            
9. We will go at the rides.   
9.         on            

D.
1.
The bakery is ______opposite______ the bank.
2.
The bank is ____________on ___________ Happy Street.
3.
The bank is ______at the corner____________of Pop Road and Happy Street.
4.
The MTR station is __________next to ________ the news-stand.
5.
The news-stand is ________at the end_______________ of Rainbow Lane.
If you want to go to the café from the MTR station, (6)_____get out _____ of the MTR station. 
(7)__Walk across_____ Pop Road and (8) __________walk straight ahead_________. 
Then (9)__walk across________ Happy Street. 
The café is (10) ______in front of_________ you.

E.
1. Why
2. Where
3. How
4. When
5. What
6. Who

F.
1. to
2. on
3. for
4. about
5. at
6. on
7. on
8. on
9. at
10. in

G. More details on google slides:
Dear Tom, (Content-0.5)
Students’ answers
Marking scheme:
·        Content- what, why, when, where and how, the needed content of writing an email
·        Organisation- Does the student show attempt to put the ideas in an organized way?
§  (example: Greetings, invitation, laying out the details and finish the email)
·        Accuracy- use of preposition, direction, punctuations and spelling (of buildings)
·        Others- paragraphing

Best wishes, (Content -0.5)
Linda
Good luck!


Monday, March 6, 2017

Guided Writing 1 Sample Good Work

Sample 1 

Let’s look at Rain’s good work to see how we can do better for our second draft.  Marks: 93

Morning     Wan Chai
We will take my dad’s car to Wan Chai and visit Golden Bauhinia Square. First we will watch the flag raising ceremony. After that, I will take some photos of the Golden Bauhinia sculpture because it is so beautiful

Afternoon    Lantau Island
We will go to Disneyland. We will go on the rides. After that, we will watch Mickey Mouse parade and some shows about Stitch, Mickey Mouse and friends, and the Lion King. I think this parade will be the most wonderful parade in my life because we may meet many cartoon characters in Disneyland.

Evening … the Peak
We will have seafood buffet dinner at the Peak because we can look at the beautiful view of Hong Kong at the same time. After dinner, we will take some photos of the Victoria Harbour. Finally, we will ride the Peak Tram back to Central and back home.  

Content:  
Give details of the activities  
·         Golden Bauhinia Square -> flag raising ceremony -> beautiful golden sculpture
·         Disneyland -> go on ridese -> Mickey Mouse parade ->
·         The Peak -> seafood buffet -> beautiful view (Victoria Harbour) -> take photos-> ride the Peak tram
Give reasons on why the activities and place are chosen.
·         The sculpture is beautiful
·         -we may meet cartoon characters

The choice of places and activities are logical

Grammar
Using “we will”
Using proper linking words and connectives“ and” “or” “so” “ because” “ Next” “ First” “ Then”
·         First, After that, After dinner, Finally
·         Making no or a few spelling mistakes.

Creativity
Include ideas and details not mentioned in the GW or Book    
·         parade, sculpture, Victoria Harbour, Lion King, Mickey Mouse, Stitch 

Tidiness

Proper hand-writing  



Sample 2 

Morning  Tsim Sha Tsui

First we will go to Tsim Sha Tsui by MTR with our parents becuase there is a very famous Chinese restaurant there. We can have dim sum at that restaurant for breakfast. I love the shrimp dumplings and the barbecued pork buns most. They are very yummy. I'm sure you will love it.

Afternoon  the Peak

After dim sum breakfast, we will take Star Ferry to Central. It's better to take the Star Ferry because we can look at the beautiful view of Victoria Harbour. After arriving Central, we will take a bus the Peak Tram terminus where we can take the Peak Tram to the Peak. We can look at the wonderful view of Hong Kong from the top of the Peak. It's very beautiful. We may also visit the wax museums. There are a lot of interesting wax figures there.

Evening    the Peak

At the Peak, we can also do a bit of shopping if we want to buy some souvenirs. At night, we can have dinner at a lovely restaurant at the Peak. We can eat and look at the night view of Hong Kong at the same time in that restaurant. It will be a great day!


Sample 3

Morning  Tsing Yi
We will meet at the Tsing Yi MTR station because there is a shopping mall at the MTR station where we can gather and have breakfast together. There is a Hong Kong traditional restaurant called Tsui Wah. The breakfast is good there. My parents like eating there so maybe we have breakfast there first because the food in Disneyland is just too expensive.

Afternoon  Disneyland

After breakfast, we may take the MTR to Disneyland together. It's only two stations away from Tsing Yi. At Disneyland, we will go on different fun rides. My favourite one is Space Mountain. It's like a roller coaster in the dark. I'm sure you will love it too! I also like the 4D movie in the Mickey Mouse theater. You were special glasses and you see interesting things popping out from the screen. I wish you will like that too.

Evening   Disneyland
In the evening, we will stay at Disneyland to watch the magnificent firework. It's my favourite activity in Disneyland because I love watching firework very much. My family like it too. It's really beautiful when you see the firework display over the Disneyland castle. After that, we can have dinner together in the city if we are not too tired. If not, we can go home first and fix dinner our own way. What do you think about this plan?



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